A Chip Off the Old Block

[This story was submitted for the Not Quite Write Prize for Flash Fiction Challenge. I was required to write a 500-word story that featured the word “punch”, featured the action of “spilling something”, and broke the writing rule of “avoid cliches”.]

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Trailer trash.

The words were scrawled across my locker in bubblegum-colored lipstick. Sniggers popped off behind me, like crickets warming up for their nocturnal chorus. I didn’t dare turn around — unwilling to endure the smirks and pointing fingers, yet again. 

I used the sleeve of my threadbare sweater as an eraser, but the lipstick simply smeared across the dull gray metal. I scrubbed harder, tears streaming. The stack of textbooks I carried spilled at my feet, adding insult to injury — I scrambled to gather them. A Nike sneaker pinned my biology book to the linoleum. The football quarterback, Silas, loomed over me, his girlfriend, Sasha, on his arm. 

“Oops, my bad. Didn’t see you there, T.T.” Silas kicked my textbook down the hall. 

Onlookers gathered like a pack of hyenas, drooling over wounded prey. 

“Get to class,” Mr. Steward shouted from his doorway across the hall as the bell rang.

Saved by the bell.

Sasha winked, blowing me a kiss with bubblegum-pink lips. “See you at lunch.” 

Mr. Steward handed me the biology book. “You need to show those jerks they’re barking up the wrong tree.”

I gave him a weak smile, shoved the books into my locker, and scurried off to the cafeteria.

The cashier sighed as I slid my tray to her register. “You still have a negative balance, sweetheart.” 

I stared at the blob of mashed potatoes on my tray. “I’m sorry. My mom said—”

Mom said, “We don’t need charity. Pack a lunch.”

A student jutted out of line. “What’s taking so long?”

“Tara, this is the last time you can borrow,” The cashier closed the register. “Remind your mom, okay?”

“T.T.’s trying to get a free lunch ‘cause she’s too poor to pay like the rest of us,” Sasha said from behind me where she had cut in line, waiting to pounce.

I spun around and upturned my tray onto her chest. Mashed potatoes and corn slid off her cheerleading uniform. She scowled at me, astonished, speechless.

“What’s wrong, Sasha? Cat got your tongue?” She opened her mouth to retort. Reeling back, I punched her perfect little nose. 

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The clock ticked in Mr. Steward’s room during after-school detention. Sasha, arms folded over her stained uniform, glared at me with purple bruises blooming around her eyes and bloody cotton balls shoved up her nose. 

When time was nearly up, the classroom door burst open and Sasha’s mom stormed in.

“You’re pathetic,” Sasha crumpled under her mother’s wrath. “Get up before you embarrass me any more than you already have.”

Sasha followed her mom into the hallway like a dog with its tail tucked between its legs.

“You better hope your nose isn’t broken,” Her mother slammed the classroom door. “Your face was your ticket out of this town. God knows you aren’t smart enough to go to college.”

Mr. Steward laid down the newspaper he was reading. “Well, I’d say she’s a chip off the old block.”

Mom said, “Hurt people hurt people.”

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Victims of the Sea

[This story was submitted for the January 2024 Australian Writers’ Centre Furious Fiction contest. It was selected for the longlist out of hundreds of entries. Contestants had to write a 500-word story that matched the following prompts: Each story had to take place on a character’s first day of a new job, each story had to include something being stolen, and each story had to include the words trip, triangle, and tsunami.]

Content warning: Death due to natural disaster.

Darma stood atop the mountain of tsunami debris. Car tire, flat. Shredded, soiled mattress. Headless mannequin. Splintered wood. Nike, size thirteen, without a mate. Serrated corrugated metal. Another body bag.

He stretched his aching back as the sunrise peeked over the horizon. He adjusted the handkerchief covering his face, eyes watering from the stench, and resumed looting. He’d been sifting through this alley all night — with nothing more to show for it than a few pieces of copper wire, a dented can of sardines, and a pack of cigarettes.

He lifted a metal cabinet, struggling momentarily under its weight. Losing his balance as he shoved it to the side, he tripped and scrambled backward, horrified by what he’d unearthed.

The woman’s ebony hair spilled out of her disheveled hijab. Her floral print dress was smattered with dried blood. Mangled limbs hinted at untold injuries. Lifeless eyes stared at him from her tomb of rubble. Another victim of the sea.

Sunlight descended into the alley, refracting against something on the woman’s chest — a triangle-shaped pendant on a golden chain.

Darma carefully unclasped the necklace and inspected it. At its center, the pendant featured a large sea-blue diamond. 

Jackpot. Maybe I can finally get the cartel off my back.

“Hey, new guy,” someone shouted from the end of the alley. 

Darma slipped the necklace into his pocket and turned. A man wearing a yellow hard hat was glaring at him, hands on his hips.

“What are you doing over here? I thought I told you to load the truck for the landfill,” the man said, pointing down the street. “Get back to work.”

Darma hesitated, but the man waited, unwavering. He played along to avoid getting caught and headed in the direction of the dump truck.

“Damn temps,” the man muttered as he trailed behind him.

Darma spent the afternoon toiling alongside temporary workers, taking relentless orders from the man in the hard hat and waiting for the opportunity to sneak away with his pocketed treasure. He had flung so many objects into dump trucks — battered washing machines, broken-down recliners, busted bookcases — that he could barely raise his shaking arms above his head. As he sat amid the detritus to rest, wringing sweat from his shirt, a finger tapped his shoulder.

 “Excuse me, sir. I’m looking for my wife. Have you seen her?” 

The man’s pleading eyes shifted between hope, desperation, and fear as he handed a photograph to Darma — a woman with a crinkly-eyed smile standing on the beach, hijab billowing in the breeze, arms reaching for the clouds, bare feet buried in the sand. And there, around her neck, was the necklace burning a hole in Darma’s pocket. 

We’re all victims of the sea now.

“Sorry,” Darma replied, “haven’t seen her.”

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